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Planning Doc: Story Structure in Undrheim

Posted on Tue May 19th, 2020 @ 12:44pm by Captain Enalia Telvan & Commander Rita Paris & Lieutenant Commander Mnhei'sahe Dox & Lieutenant Commander Thex sh'Zoarhi & Lieutenant Commander Sonak & Lieutenant Samuel Clemens XV & Lieutenant JG Tovanna Mah & Ensign Tanaak Sado
Edited on on Tue May 19th, 2020 @ 12:45pm

Mission: OOC Documents

Meeting Notes:

Enalia goes to Ten Forward after the bridge briefing while Commander t’Rekt goes to sickbay to meet with her people and then return to her ship to oversee the procedures, etc.

In Ten-Forward, Enalia can comment to herself that she felt tired and weird the whole meeting, as if her connection to her symbiote was reacting to something external, then she passes out. The last thing she hears before blackness takes her is the barkeep calling for the Doctor. Then that can be a prologue of Enalia’s nightmare post.


The Captain in sickbay, asleep as Doc Power can explain to Rita she’s in a light coma and there’s no way to know when she’s going to come out. Sonak can be there to possibly hypothesize that it may be that same presence he felt and is defending himself from, leaving Rita in command to then have to go to Kodira and follow up on the Dox data that they HOPE is in her brain.

Two part holodeck Kodria story where they get, at least SOME part of the code. Or NOT, because we have the thin section that the Persephone will start bombarding with gravitons. Either can be how we’ll escape, so it might actually be interesting if the Kodria story doesn’t work so we have to replan. Your call, Sabrina and Az.


Rita gets hypos from Doc Power to stay awake when she begins getting reports of terrible nightmares afflicting the crew. Stays awake MOST of the time, but eventually succumbs to sleep near the end.


Rita wakes up in time to institute the “Christmas tree lights” maneuver, linked to the three Warbirds to open the gateway back as the eldritch horrors start to stir. On the Warbird, Commander t’Rekt and a portion of her crew betray her and take over the ship, threatening to abandon the Hera in the rift after the passage is open, but t’Rekt gave Rita all three Warbird’s command codes and can take control of those ships and the rift is re-opened and the ships escape back to reality.


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